Essay grumble
Jan. 12th, 2010 03:26 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
beccaelizabethstupid essay is too stupid short. also, it is stupid.
and I don't think it actually answers a question. any question. we had a selection. It kind of vaguely answers small parts of several questions. perhaps if I don't print the question out to go with it the teacher will pick one it probably fits.
*headdesk*
see, this is what happens when I've got nothing to say and no ideas at all. the essay looks like it! No fair.
... okay, kinda fair, but I turned up to all the classes, so not very fair at all at all.
I shall have to have another look at the questions, and my essay, and write bits to specific answer something particular.
also if I just throw quotes in as usual it'll probably end up too long again as usual. But teach told me last time I should quote longer bits and refer back to them, so there's more words for actual thinking with. I think she'll notice if I just dilute it with quotes.
bothering stupid blasted thing.
I wrote quite a lot about cows though. I like the bit about cows. teach said she didn't understand the cows so I thought I'd start out saying the cows were important and then link them to absolutely everything ever. The idea was to trace a pattern made of cows, cause tracing patterns is one of the essay questions. But there's only so many words one can devote to cows. There's also bits about gods and goddesses which were fun. I feel there's some kind of pattern made of perceptions of light and them being associated with danger and burning, but I can't really do much more with it than that sentence right there, which is already in the essay.
Mostly I think it's someone trying to write about a mentally ill person by making the story not actually make sense. Boo.
1389 words out of 1500 isn't a disaster. I can totally fix that.
I hope.
Probably.
Er, it would help if I wrote some sort of proper conclusion. Possibly using proper lit words in it.
stupid stupid essay.
and I don't think it actually answers a question. any question. we had a selection. It kind of vaguely answers small parts of several questions. perhaps if I don't print the question out to go with it the teacher will pick one it probably fits.
*headdesk*
see, this is what happens when I've got nothing to say and no ideas at all. the essay looks like it! No fair.
... okay, kinda fair, but I turned up to all the classes, so not very fair at all at all.
I shall have to have another look at the questions, and my essay, and write bits to specific answer something particular.
also if I just throw quotes in as usual it'll probably end up too long again as usual. But teach told me last time I should quote longer bits and refer back to them, so there's more words for actual thinking with. I think she'll notice if I just dilute it with quotes.
bothering stupid blasted thing.
I wrote quite a lot about cows though. I like the bit about cows. teach said she didn't understand the cows so I thought I'd start out saying the cows were important and then link them to absolutely everything ever. The idea was to trace a pattern made of cows, cause tracing patterns is one of the essay questions. But there's only so many words one can devote to cows. There's also bits about gods and goddesses which were fun. I feel there's some kind of pattern made of perceptions of light and them being associated with danger and burning, but I can't really do much more with it than that sentence right there, which is already in the essay.
Mostly I think it's someone trying to write about a mentally ill person by making the story not actually make sense. Boo.
1389 words out of 1500 isn't a disaster. I can totally fix that.
I hope.
Probably.
Er, it would help if I wrote some sort of proper conclusion. Possibly using proper lit words in it.
stupid stupid essay.